I Have Sinned

I used the phrase “fueled the flame of his desire” while trying to finish my nano novel. I’m pretty sure this is punishable by law. Color me shamed. Hopefully it will be edited out.

That is all.

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4 thoughts on “I Have Sinned

  1. Even though it’s not exactly optimal, I’m pretty sure it’s okay to use “fueled the flame of his desire” as long as it’s not in the same sentence as the words loin, ragged breath, or a throbbing anything.

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