Beautiful Books Link Up: Editing

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1. On a scale of 1 (worst) to 10 (best) how well do you think this book turned out?

Like a 6? It needs lots of editing, but doesn’t everything? I’ll get it all sorted out before anyone reads the terrible bits.

2. Have you ever rewritten or editing one of your books before? If so, what do you do to prepare yourself? If not, what’s your plan?

Yes, just the one. My plan is to print it out to see it on paper (using my school’s free print credits) and go through editing it all, rewriting what I have to, rearranging things, you know. Then I’ll go through it again, make any more major changes that need done, then read through it two more times or so to find any smaller mistakes.

3. What’s your final wordcount? Do you plan to lengthen or trim your book?

TBA. Still writing, but I’m guessing that I’ll be over at around 70k, but I’ll want to make it longer during editing to about 80k.

4. What’s are you most proud of? Plot, characters, or pacing?

Um… plot? Maybe? Everything needs a lot of work, so…

5. What’s your favourite bit of prose or line from this novel?

Before she could say another word, Daivat captured her lips and pulled her against him. He felt a fierce need to claim her, to mark her as his own, but he pushed it down. She was still new to everything, and he would teach her to enjoy their time together, not that she seemed to be having any trouble.

6. What aspect of your book needs the most work?

All the aspects! But pacing, technical errors, character consistency are at the top of my list right now.

7. What aspect of your book is your favourite?

The characters.

8. How are your characters? Well-rounded, or do they still need to be fleshed-out?

They need fleshed out and shoved back into their personalities. Wild needs to be less serious and Daivat needs to be more serious.

9. If you had to do it over again, what would you change about the whole process?

Nothing.

10. Did anything happen in your book that completely surprised you? Have any scenes or characters turned out differently to what you planned? Good or bad?

Yes, actually. The kidnapped princess didn’t go as I’d planned, but I like the new direction.

11. What was the theme and message? Do you think it came across? If not, is there anything you could do to bring it out more?

There wasn’t really a theme or message. Overall, it was just about growing up.

12. Do you like writing with a deadline (like NaNoWriMo) or do you prefer to write-as-it-comes?

I like write-as-it-comes, but then it takes forever to finish anything.

13. Comparative title time! What published books, movies, or TV shows are like your book? (Ex: Inkheart meets X-Men, etc.)

Um, nothing? Maybe Ella Enchanted meets Game of Thrones?

14. How do you celebrate a finished novel?!

With editing!

15. When people are done reading your book, what feeling do you want them to come away with?

Just pleasure from reading a good story.

NaNoWriMo For Newbies – Part Five, Reaching 50,000

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Alright, this is the final installment in the NaNoWriMo for newbies. I’ve been scanning the forums for tips and tricks to reach 50,000 words, and I’ve picked out the best ones, not that I don’t have my own tips to share.

Don’t despair at the quality of your writing. Critics points out that NaNoWriMo does nothing but force writers to churn out shit that will never make it to the final draft, but that isn’t true. NaNoWriMo forces me to write when I would rather sit and watch TV or avoid writing a difficult scene. I have to keep thinking about how the story progresses, and I have to finish it (or get within the last few chapters). Once it’s done, I have all the scenes and character development, or lack thereof. I can see what the story needs and start editing it to make it actually readable. It’s worth the stress just to be able to make it that far.

Don’t edit. At all. Unless it’s going to add to your word count. Decide that you want to change your MC’s uncle’s name? Don’t go back, just make a note of it and keep writing. Decide that you want to hint at a hidden door in your FMC’s walk-in closet? Go ahead and add a paragraph about it in chapter two, then come right back to the end point and keep writing. Typos and grammatical errors will be easy to catch when reading back through, you don’t have to worry about it. It’ll be fine.

Don’t be afraid to jump around. Write the last scene, then the sex scene that will happen later. Go back to the fourth chapter then write an awesome scene that still needs some sort of connecting to your current point. As long as you remember the order, you’ll be fine. (I do everything old school and just sit down and write in a Word doc. If I’m writing ahead in time, I just insert a page break and write it so that it’s at the end of the document whenever I need to put it into the actual timeline.)

Make a playlist that motivates you. Try an inspiration folder (but only when you’re caught up on your word counts!) Give yourself treats for reaching your word goals. I know that week two is the worst, and that it’s hard to get through the period of not-beginning and not-ending, but push through. Write whatever crap comes to mind. It might turn out to be gold, or it’ll serve as a good starting block for a real scene.

Dirty Tricks: Give your character two names, like Mary Jane. Use long chapter titles. Add in blog posts about your writing. Give your character a very long title that he insists on being referred to as, like The Mother of Dragons, The Unburnt, Breaker of Chains, and so on. Have a babbling character who speaks about really mundane things. Do not use contractions. Use all five senses to describe things, even if it’s just to say that your character heard nothing interesting.

Good luck to all of you! If you’re behind on your word count, use the weekend to get ahead. Feel free to share any problems you’re having with your novel. I’m really struggling just to keep thing interesting when not much is happening, but I will push on! I’m having foot surgery over winter break, so I’ll have lots of free time for editing.

Previous parts: The Plot, Your MC, Your Love Interest, Subplots, and Outlining,

Beautiful Books Link Up: Writing

1. Be honest: how is your writing going?

It was going pretty good, but my parents came up on my day off and I didn’t get very much writing done. I’m at the lull spot just below 20,000, so I just need to fight through that.

2. What’s your first sentence/paragraph?

Wild raced across the field as Flower barked happily, trailing behind with her tongue lolling out. Wild jumped over a hole and sped up even more, pushing her aching muscles until she slapped her hand against the rough bark. She grinned and turned back to see where Quade had gone, but he was nowhere in sight. Before he could crest the hill, she told Flower to sit and hid herself completely, ready to surprise him.

 

3. Do you have a book cover, and/or pictures that reflect your book?

Yes. I don’t have my computer, so to see it just go here.

 

4. Do you have pictures of each of your characters? If not, describe them for us! (Be as descriptive as you can.)

Wild has pale skin and long black hair. She’s petite and has a dainty nose with big purple eyes. Quade looks the same, though he’s taller and maler and he shaves his head in the first few chapters. Daivat has short brown hair and brown eyes. He has broad shoulders and he’s of average height, and he’s very muscular. Cadmus is very skinny with shallow skin. He has brown eyes and dark hair, and he is prone to shivering even when it’s warm.

 

5. What scene are you most excited to write?

Hmmmmm. When Wild blows things up (not literally) and has to leave the castle.

 

6. Share a snippet or a scene that you really enjoyed writing.

“I have been informed that there is something more important than our current lessons. You’ve started your bleedings, correct?”
“Yes,” Wild said. “What does that have to do with anything?”
“Dear, do you what it means to have a bleeding? Why only women get them?”
“Quade said that women have too much blood so they must bleed each month to get rid of it.”
“Oh, Mercy,” the queen said. “And how do you think children are made?”
“Like all other animal babies,” Wild said. “They start growing in your stomach and then in the spring someone has to take it out.”
“Yes, but how does it get there? Do you know a man’s part in it?”
“The man has to keep the baby healthy and protect it once it’s born,” Wild said. She smiled. Finally, she had the right answers for what the queen was telling her.
“Dear… I regret to inform you that you are wrong.”

 

7. Now that you’re writing, have any of the plot details, or the process itself, turned out different from what you planned or imagined?

It’s happening a little differently, but it’s basically the same as I thought. I might need to add some stuff to keep it from being boring. The characters are also a bit different than I planned, but I think I’ll edit them during editing to keep them as I had imagined them.

 

8. Is there a character or aspect of your plot that’s difficult to write?

It’s harder than I thought to keep things interesting while my character is trapped in the castle.

 

9. What’s your favorite aspect of this novel so far? Favorite character?

I think my favorite character is Cadmus. He’s just so sweet and earnest.

 

10. Have you drawn off of any life experiences or people you know to create your novel and your characters?

Nope.

 

11. Do you have a playlist or certain song for your novel and/or characters?

Not yet, but I always listen to Muse whenever I get behind. It’s just my standard writing music.

 

12. Let’s have some fun for a moment: imagine you are somehow transported into your book’s world. Which character are you most likely to be found hanging out with?

Quade, because he’s a bastard.

 

13. How do you keep yourself motivated to finish your daily wordcount? (Pinterest? Internet breaks? Chocolate?)

I don’t have a computer, so there’s not much else to do other than write…

 

14. What your favourite writing quote or piece of writing advice?

Steinbeck thought that everything he wrote was crap, so remember that next time you think your writing is shit.

 

15. How does this book make you feel so far? Are you laughing? Crying? Frustrated?

A bit frustrated. I want it to be funner and funnier, but it’s not there yet. I’ll need to add more life to it during editing once I get the framework in place.

(Here was part 1.)

Nano Check-In

I still don’t have a computer, but I’m still keeping my word count up. I’m around 17k right now, but I’m hoping to pass 20k tonight. I’m okay with how my novel is turning out so far, though I already have a mental list of all the editing I need. I hope everyone else is doing well so far. Don’t get discouraged if you get behind! It’s only the first week, so there’s plenty of time to catch up!

Starting Strong for NaNoWriMo!

Hello all! I still don’t have a computer, but as soon as I knew that my computer was on death row, I ordered an AlphaSmart. It looks a bit like this.

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I got this model because it was the cheapest, though I think there were better, newer models. The keys are pretty tough, I have to slam down my fingers to get the letters to take, but I’ve written 4.8k so far, so I’m pretty happy with it. It came with a cord that I can use to transfer the files I type to the computer, but it’s pretty slow. It transfers it by emulating a keyboard so you have to wait for it to type everything out. My boyfriend has been patient enough to let me transfer everything to his computer since I’m paranoid that it’ll stop saving for no reason. But yeah, hasn’t happened yet, though it’s only been a day.

I’ll post some general nano tips later in the month, preferably when I have a computer I don’t have to feel guilty for using. For the rest of you, keep up that word count! Day one (technically two) is no time to be falling behind!

NaNoWriMo for Newbies – Part 4, Outlining

Brace Yourselves

Unfortunately, because of a computer breaking only a month after I got it I MEAN SERIOUSLY WTF A MONTH??? malfunction this post is coming a little late, but better late than never, right? Write. (Heh, see what I did there?)

So, for me, outlining is simple. Very simple. I was taught rigorous outlining methods in middle school for our research papers. Here was the basic format:

I. Something
A. Something more.
B. Something even more.
1. Oh lala, more detail.
a. more detail about that detail
b. Ron Walrus for president 4030
2. And you gotta have at least two for each section with more detail
a. dunno
b. why
i. stupid
ii. rule
II. Something else.

Obviously, to do it with that method you just have to make the roman numerals into chapters and break down everything in the chapter. That’s what I usually do, that way I can know what happens when and look right to the next thing when I need to write on, with the roman numerals and the letters having the real action and the smaller ones having the detail I came up with when planning the scene. I did NaNoWriMo with an outline like this one year and it was the easiest NaNo I’ve ever done, hands down. Need to get ahead on your word count? Your next scene is right there. All the detail is right there, all in chronological order.

Now some of you, myself included, either don’t have time for such detail or can’t come up with so much on the spot for plot ideas. Well, that’s fine too. This year I’m going a general outline, which just looks like this.

  • Wild meets the outlaws and agrees to be the princess.
  • The Queen finds Wild and wants to behead her, but the King doesn’t. Says they need her.
  • Wild tries to sneak out but can’t find the outlaws.

Basically like that. Just all the points I can think of now, without assigning them to a chapter or putting significance in the bullet. I wrote it out (though those of you who don’t have to run to the computer lab for computer access may want to type it) and left spaces in-between bullets for new ideas that came to mind. I just bulleted my way from start to finish, though there’s an easier way to do that for those of you who are terrible at outlining.

Fill out these:

  • What happens to start the story off?
  • What is happening in the middle?
  • What happens to set off the final events?
  • How does it end?

Once you answer those, fill out the points between them, even if you don’t know anything. If you know that MC and his love interest will hook up in the second half, put that in there. Will the MC see a bad omen in the first half? Slide that in. Any ideas you take the time to write down will help you when you’re stuck and you don’t know what to write. It’ll make everything so much easier if you have some sort of outline, even if it’s just a general direction of where you want each chapter to go.

Next time I will be covering general tips for reaching 50,000 words (assuming my head doesn’t implode from the stress of not having a computer).

If you missed it, part one on plot was here, part two on your main character was here, part two and a half on your love interest was here, and part three on your subplots was here.

Beautiful Books Link Up: Planning

What came first: characters or plot idea? Are you a plotter or a pantser?

Character. Wild was a girl in another short I had written, one that I might post if I ever find the file. I was writing with the prompt, “Your character must protect what is hers” and I wrote about this feral woman protecting a field that people were trying to develop. In that versaion, she was much older, much more feral, and she could transform into a lion. She was also ginger. I took her, made her younger, made her more fair, gave her a dog and an uncle, and then decided from her personality what the plot would be. I am most certainly a plotter, so I need to get outlining to hammer out the details.

Do you have a title and/or a “back-cover-blurb”?

It’s called Colors of the Sky and here is the terrible description:

Wild has been running her whole life from the power she never asked for. She does everything she can to push her dark secret from her mind, determined to fill her life with excitement and fun. When a band of outlaws comes to her with a proposition to infiltrate the royal castle and switch places with the princess, she immediately accepts the job.

Daivat’s life has always been structured and orderly. He wakes every day at dawn and practices tirelessly at his sword work and archery. His dream is to be a member of the king’s personal guard, but first he must prove himself by keeping an eye on the imposter princess while she fools visiting nobles into thinking she’s real royalty.

Wild and Daivat’s personalities collide. Can Daviat bring order to Wild’s life, or will Wild awaken something Daivat has never felt before?

What wordcount are you aiming for when your novel is finished?

Completely finished? 75,000 – 85,000. I probably won’t get much further than 50,ooo at the end of November though.

Sum up your novel in 3 sentences.

A wild girl has to learn to be proper in order to impersonate a princess. She falls in love with her guard while the real princess must deal with the outlaws that kidnapped her. When Wild’s secret is exposed, she’s threatened to go on the run once more, evading those who seek to end her life.

Sum up your characters in one word each.

Wild (since I assume I can’t use her name): Enthusiastic

Daivat: Serious.

Roseabel (whose name I forgot): Spoiled

Quade: grumpy

Which character are you most excited to write? Tell us about them!

Wild, for sure. She is super excited about everything in life, and she thinks that pretending to be a princess is just one big game. She’s naïve enough to constantly get herself in trouble, but she’s quick-witted enough to get herself out again. Because of her, the book is going to be full of energy and fun.

What about your villain? Who is he, what is his goal?

There isn’t really a villain. Quade is a bit of an asshole, but in his own way he wants what’s best for Wild. In the end, she’s hunted down, but that’s still not really out of maliciousness. The outlaws are obviously outlaws, but none of them are overtly evil.

What is your protagonist’s goal? And what stands in the way?

Wild just wants to have fun. She constantly fears her secret coming out and revealing itself, so she is her own worst enemy.

What inciting incident begins your protagonist’s journey?

An injured outlaw staggers into Wild’s field. She takes him back to her cave to heal him, and then takes him to where he was supposed to meet with his outlaw friends.

Where is your novel set?

The medieval fantasy world of Arium. Specifically, the kingdom of Eskia.

What are three big scenes in your novel that change the game completely?

  • When the queen decides to allow Wild to continue pretending to be the princess instead of having her put to death. Not only does the queen come to care for Wild, but Roseabel (I am totally spelling that wrong) was promised to the crowned prince of Blairford, and since the kingdoms have been on the verge of war for years, the queen is afraid that if they don’t produce a bride for the wedding, Blairford will call it off.
  • When Wild jumps Daivat. Literally jumps. He is not amused, but he softens up eventually…
  • When Wild’s secret is revealed. No, I’m not telling anyone what the secret is. Y’all will have to read it when it comes out.

What is the most dynamic relationship your character has? Who else do they come in contact with or become close to during the story?

I have to say with Quade. Her relationship with Daivat is pretty straightforward, but Quade is different. She doesn’t know he’s her uncle in the beginning, and she gets quite mad when he reveals it, because she’s never had any real family, and in the end he tells her that her mother is actually alive. The entire time, he’s been raising her waiting for her to display her secret, though he thinks he nature of her secret is MUCH different. He’s been doing it out of duty, not love, so the feelings between them are a little complicated.

How does your protagonist change by the end of the novel?

She learns to be much more level-headed. She doesn’t push people’s boundaries as much and she learns to just be calm sometimes.

Do you have an ending in mind, or do you plan to see what happens?

I see Wild running away with Daivat with hounds at their heels. Quade finds them and takes them to his secret hideaway, with lots of interesting spoilers. Her and Daivat decide to see the world and sail away, waving to the readers as they go (not really).

What are your hopes and dreams for your book? What impressions are you hoping this novel will leave on your readers and yourself?

I just hope that it’s as fun for the readers as I envision it. It’s going to be a lot of the character finding herself, so I hope that girls of that age (18-25) will be able to connect to it because of that, but also that people will be drawn in by the characters and the plot. I’m not aiming for anything deep here, I just want to write an enjoyable book that others will like.

 

I encourage you all to do this, I think it helps get you into the mood for NaNoWriMo. Plus it was fun. Here’s the blog I found it at, and she’s writing about a sheep so you can check that out.

NaNoWriMo for Newbies – Part 3, Subplots

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Okay, so the picture is completely unrelated, but I found it on the NaNo page on Facebook and I think it perfectly sums up how it feels to be a writer.

Anyways, today I’ll be talking about subplots. So, here’s all we’ve got so far with parts 1 through 2 1/2:

My story is about a fun-loving girl who needs to keep her secret hidden in order to continue impersonating the princess until the real one is found. When Wild meets Daviat, she thinks he’s boring and rude. Then, he’s assigned to guard her at all times, and they are forced to put up with each other.  Daviat proves his love when he runs away from the castle with Wild to protect her.

So, it’s hard to distinguish what is plot and what is subplot, so I’m going to call it safe and say that both the romance and impersonating the princess counts as the main plot, because they’re really tied to each other, and I can’t have one without the other. To keep things interesting, you need a subplot. Or two. Or six. Really, this being NaNoWriMo, I’m not going to tell you how many you can have (especially since my novel Kiss of The Fey has more than a few, though they are tiny) but here is a quote from another blog on the matter:

That being so, here is my formula for the maximum number of subplots, by word count, you can have in your novel (a novel being a minimum of 60,000 words).
60k words: 1 subplot (e.g., in a category romance, you might have the female Lead plotline, and the love interest plotline, which intersect)
80k: 2-3
100k: 3-4
Over 100 k: 5
James Scott Bell

So, since NaNoWriMo’s goal is 50,000 words we’ll focus on one subplot today. Because I like them so much, here’s another fill in the blank:

While (MC) (blanks), (blank) happens to (character). (Character) must (blank) to make things right.

Yes, that’s very vague, but there is so much room for subplots that it’s hard to narrow down. I’m not trying to give you ideas, but to help you translate your imagination into a paragraph you can work on to write you novel.

Here’s my fill in the blank:

While Wild learns to be a princess, the real princess is taken by the kidnappers and kept as a hostage. The real princess must survive the savage band of barbarians if she ever wants to see her family again.

Again, it’s not exact, just a general guideline. This is a reminder that there are adoptable in the NaNoWriMo forums, so if you still can’t think of a plot, a character, or a subplot, you can snatch one from over there. Here’s another example of how a subplot would fit into the fill in the blank: While MC fights the villain, she begins seeing a dark figure lurking out of the corner of her eyes. She must find the source of this shadow before she can hope to send the villain back to the dark realm. (If you want that plot, you can have it. It was from the adoptable.) 

I hope that helped some of you. Next time I will be covering outlining, and then there will be one post on general tips for reaching 50,000 words.

If you missed it, part one on plot was here, part two on your main character was here, and part two and a half on your love interest was here.

NaNoWriMo For Newbies – Part 2 ½, Your Love Interest

As you can see, I’ve labeled this as part 2 ½ because I know that many of you aren’t writing romance. That’s fine. Tune back in for part three, but for those of you who want to put that spark into your writing, this is the place to be. (If you missed it, part one, the plot is here and part two, your MC is here.)

Alright, so your MC is going to fall in love with this love interest, who’ll be called Squishy from this point on. If you’re writing a romance, you likely considered Squishy when writing your plot from part one. However, you might not have. I didn’t:

My story is about a fun-loving girl who needs to keep her secret hidden in order to continue impersonating the princess until the real one is found.

Because there are other elements in my story, there’s no hint of romance in it. So we need another fill in the blank.

When MC meets (Squishy) he/she thinks (blank). Then, (blank) happens and they (blank).

That’s very broad, but here’s how I would apply it to my story:

When Wild meets Daviat, she thinks he’s boring and rude. Then, he’s assigned to guard her at all times, and they are forced to put up with each other.

Clearly, just from that sentence you can see a plot emerging. Wild is fun-loving, but Daviat is a stick in the mud. He guards her to keep her in line while she’s impersonating the princess, and you can think of all the situations where they could connect since they’re together 24/7.

Here’s another fill in the blank to be applied to the second act of your novel (or at least it shouldn’t happen in the beginning if you’re writing a romance):

(Squishy) proves his/her love when he/she (blanks) for (MC).

My example: Daviat proves his love when he runs away from the castle with Wild to protect her.

Once you’ve completed that, here are some general romance tips:

  • If your main genre is romance, you need subplots. You can’t have an entire novel of MC and Squishy falling in love.
  • Avoid love triangles, please.
  • No matter what genre you’re writing, your characters CANNOT fall in love instantly unless they acknowledge that it is way too sudden but they can’t stop it OR you’re using as a plot device in YA like, “Oh silly teenager you think you’re in love.” By taking out the slow progression of romance, you’re killing the genre.

Anyways, I hope this helped! Part three will be sub-plots!

November Calenders for NaNoWriMo 2014

So, I went a little crazy and made 10 calenders to cycle throughout November. I figured that since they were so simple, I’d just make it a layer that I could put over any image. All of the images are either stock images or pictures I took myself, so feel free to use these wherever you want. I made them for my computer, but if one of you have a screen that the calenders look really bad with, I can resize your favorite for you.

Anyways, here they are. These are smaller files, the link at the end has a zip folder with all of them together.

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So here’s the link! If you like the boxes and the text and have an image you want for your calender, just tell me and I can make it for you. 🙂